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| Overview |
E-mail is increasingly popular among beginning writers who find electronic
communication highly engaging. Educators also consider e-mail a powerful medium
for literacy learning, but e-mail style and conventions differ from traditional
writing. E-mail messages are a particular form of writing that invites innovation
and can be contrasted with more traditional letters to help children begin
to appreciate the choices writers make and the genre constraints under which
they operate. In this lesson, students explore the differences between e-mail
and letter writing by contrasting and identifying different forms, and experimenting
with their own e-mail and letter compositions.
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| From Theory to Practice |
E-mail is a motivating tool for teaching writing because children
enjoy communicating in this medium. E-mail has become a pervasive form of
communication that children must
learn in order to be fully literate. Technology, then, is a powerful tool for
learning to write; however, screen writing
may have unintended effects on children’s literacy learning if differences
between screen and paper genres are not explored. As a genre, e-mail messages
follow “rules” for style and conventions
that differ from the norms for handwritten letters. Children can learn about
these differences by comparing and experimenting with writing e-mail messages
and letters. Children’s awareness of genre differences may help them
understand and master the various written forms they will encounter in
their lives.
Further Reading
Wollman-Bonilla, J. E. (2003). E-mail as genre: A beginning writer
learns the
conventions. Language Arts, 81, 126-134.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- Compare an e-mail message and a letter on the same topic and discuss how
they are written differently and why.
- Recognize differences in the form and
function of the two genres and how these differences impact communication
style and conventions.
- Develop their understanding of the choices they must
make as writers with respect to the appropriate form, function, and audience
for different kinds
of communication.
- Work collaboratively to sort samples of e-mail messages
and letters based on what they have learned to reinforce and assess their
understanding of the
differences.
- Independently compose an original e-mail message and a
letter on the same topic, to the same person.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
Preparation
- This lesson assumes that students have already been introduced to e-mail
as a form of communication and have basic knowledge of how to create and
send a simple message.
- Prepare the attached side-by-side samples (or an alternative)
for projection.
- Make copies for all students of the three
examples of communication about forgotten homework (or create your own examples and copy them).
Cut the sheets so that the three messages are separated.
- Make
sure each student has an appropriate e-mail address to send a message to.
- Choose
a topic for the student-composed letters and messages that is relevant
and purposeful in the context of your classroom.
- Make copies of the E-Mail
and Letter Writing Rubric, one for each
student, to use in feedback on the project.
- Test the Venn Diagram Student Interactive and the E-Mail Abbreviation Student Interactive on your computers
to familiarize yourself with the tool and ensure that you have the Flash
plug-in installed. You can download the plug-in from the technical
support page.
Instruction and Activities
Session One
- Project the side-by-side e-mail message and letter but do not identify
each as either e-mail or letter. Read both aloud and then re-read with students
reading along.
- Ask students if they notice anything that is the same about the
two texts (e.g. topic, intended recipient) and begin to list their brainstormed
ideas
on chart paper under the heading “Same” or in the overlapping, center section of the Venn Diagram, using the Venn Diagram Student Interactive. Move fairly quickly
to looking for differences.
- Ask students if they notice any differences between
the two texts. Do
they sound any different (e.g. one sounds more like talking to someone)?
Are they
written differently (e.g. different words)? Do they look different (e.g.
length)? Are there any differences in spelling or punctuation? Guide them
through brainstorming,
as needed, and list their brainstormed ideas on the chart paper or board
under the heading “Different” or in the appropriate circle of the Venn Diagram Student Interactive.
- Once students have exhausted their
ideas about differences ask if they know what kind of text each of these
might be. If a student does not identify
one
as e-mail and the other as a letter then do so for them.
- Next, using the
brainstormed lists, discuss characteristics of the e-mail message as opposed
to the letter, being sure to identify the following points typical of younger
writers’s e-mail:
- E-mail style is
more like informal chatting (e.g. So…” or “huh” instead
of “Today we have a snow day so I am..”); the language used is
more informal (e.g. “Hey” instead of “Dear”).
- E-mail
messages are not as elaborated or lengthy as comparable letters (e.g. “Cool,
huh” instead of “It’s so cool to be home on a school
day!”).
- E-mail mechanics are not governed by the same traditional
conventions as letter writing (e.g. “G2g” instead of “Got
to go” and
innovative use of punctuation).
- E-mailers write as if they expect rapid
receipt and reply
(e.g. “Are you there” vs. “If you get this letter in
time…”).
- End
the discussion by telling students they will use what they’ve
just been talking about next time, when they will play a sorting game.
Session Two
- Refer again to the brainstormed lists created in session one and ask
students to help each other remember what the differences are between e-mail
messages and letters. After a brief discussion of what they remember, tell
students they are going to try a challenging and fun sorting game.
- Place students
in small groups of 3-5. Explain that you will hand out copies of 3 messages to each child. Working together, they need to identify
which one is a letter from Al to his teacher explaining why homework was
forgotten, which one is an e-mail from Al to his teacher explaining why homework
was forgotten, and which one is an e-mail from Al to his friend explaining
why homework was forgotten.
- Hand out the three texts for sorting, so that
each child receives a copy of all three texts, each on separate pieces of
paper. Explain that students
should work together, discussing and explaining their ideas, to decide which
message is which. Once they have decided, at the top of each paper they should
write either: “letter to teacher,” “e-mail to teacher,” or “e-mail
to friend.”
- After about 10-15 minutes of group work, tell each group
that they will have to explain their decisions to the class as a whole and
should discuss
what they are going to say when their turn comes to explain how they sorted
the texts. Can they name specific things that helped them decide what each
one is?
- Circulate to help the groups name some specifics, such as differences
in style (e.g. conversational vs. more formal voice, abbreviated vs. elaborated
information, “signature”) and mechanics (e.g. What’s ^,
hw, 2morrow, and use of punctuation and capitalization). Note that e-mail
messages can vary in level of formality and convention depending upon the
recipient.
- In a whole class discussion, allow each group to share its decisions
and underlying reasons for them. As they share ideas, match their reasons
to
what is already on the brainstormed list and add to the list as needed. Consider
the differences between the two e-mail messages. How is the one to Al’s
friend different from the one to his teacher? How are they the same? Why?
- Tell
students now that they know so much about the differences between e-mail
messages and letters they are going to try to write their own next
time.
Session Three
- Using a topic that is relevant for your class (e.g. an upcoming event
or something needed for school) create a purposeful writing assignment or
allow children to choose their own topics. Typical topics might include inviting
families to a class presentation or school assembly or performance, telling
families about an upcoming field trip and what is needed, writing
to a favorite author, or writing to a pen pal about something special that
has occurred.
- Explain that students must write two messages on this topic,
as is sometimes done in the world outside of school. They must write an
e-mail message and
a letter. Explain that frequently people send both an e-mail message and
a letter to communicate in the form that each recipient will find most
useful, convenient or comfortable, and to take advantage of the speed of
e-mail but
to ensure that the message is received in hard copy on paper.
- Based on the
selected topic(s), briefly have students begin to brainstorm possible content
for their messages as a whole group, to generate several
ideas that will help all students get started writing.
- Ask students to
begin their writing. Although they may begin with either message it may
be easiest for young students (who tend to write
in less
elaborated fashion generally) to begin with the less elaborated e-mail
and revise it
to make it a more elaborated letter. More advanced beginning writers,
however, may find it easier to get everything down on paper and then
cut out the
unnecessary detail, convert to symbols, and simplify to create an e-mail
message that
distills the most important information from the letter and communicates
it in a spare style.
- As students begin to write, circulate to provide
assistance with where to begin, what to include in the e-mail message and
the letter,
and how
to work from one text to the other, conferring as needed to assist
and encourage
students.
- Complete the process by sending the message and letter to
the intended recipients.
Extensions
Web Resources
- A Beginner's Guide to Effective Email
http://webfoot.com/advice/email.top.html
- This Web site provides helpful background information for teachers on differences
between e-mail and other kinds of writing.
- Growing with Media: Dilemmas
http://www.pbs.org/parents/issuesadvice/growingwithmedia/preteen/dilemmas/dilemma5.html
- A Web site for teachers, and especially families, addressing differences
between types of writing and how these can be discussed with children, so that
children
become conscious of electronic communication as one form that may differ from
other types of writing. Introduces families to the objectives teachers are
trying to achieve in this lesson.
- How Does Email
Work? (from the Arthur site)
http://pbskids.org/arthur/games/postcards/email.html
- This basic explanation from the PBSKids site explains how e-mail addresses
work and how e-mail messages are routed to the right person.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
If possible, it is great to read the e-mail and letter with the student individually
and provide direct feedback. When this option is not available, constructive
written
comments are helpful. As you read the two pieces, keep notes on the aspects
to review and share with the class later. To structure your feedback, use
the E-Mail
and Letter Writing Rubric.
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4 - Students adjust their use of spoken, written, and visual language (e.g., conventions, style, vocabulary) to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
9 - Students develop an understanding of and respect for diversity in language use, patterns, and dialects across cultures, ethnic groups, geographic regions, and social roles.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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